Direct marketing – long copy v short copy

From time to time, as a freelance copywriter, you take a look at the websites and portfolios of other freelance writers. It’s part research, part curiosity, and ends up either ego-boosting or ego-bashing. You’re never quite sure which until you get there.

Sometimes you’re prompted by an article. I was notified of a Q&A session on LinkedIn concerning direct marketing. The question solicited opinion on how effective long copy is against short copy. Opinion, by and large, rejected long copy on a personal level but acknowledged that the received wisdom is that it ‘works’. All the statistics I’ve seen imply that this is true.

I personally, while more than capable of writing at length, don’t like reams of sales or marketing material. Just the sight of a page where I can see I’ll have to scroll indefinitely is enough to hit the tiny X at the top right of the page.

What’s more, most of the proponents of long copy in direct marketing appear that I’ve come across seem to be American. Perhaps in my eyes even the British practitioners’ websites take on that US image.

So, long copy is a turn-off for me, but I’m intrigued to know what others think. Forget the received wisdom – I’m looking at personal responses here – does long copy direct marketing get you buying, or do you break out in hives and move on?

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From time to time, as a freelance copywriter, you take a look at the websites and portfolios of other freelance writers. It’s part research, part curiosity, and ends up either ego-boosting or ego-bashing. You’re never quite sure which until you get there.

Sometimes you’re prompted by an article. I was notified of a Q&A session on LinkedIn concerning direct marketing. The question solicited opinion on how effective long copy is against short copy. Opinion, by and large, rejected long copy on a personal level but acknowledged that the received wisdom is that it ‘works’. All the statistics I’ve seen imply that this is true.

I personally, while more than capable of writing at length, don’t like reams of sales or marketing material. Just the sight of a page where I can see I’ll have to scroll indefinitely is enough to hit the tiny X at the top right of the page.

What’s more, most of the proponents of long copy in direct marketing appear that I’ve come across seem to be American. Perhaps in my eyes even the British practitioners’ websites take on that US image.

So, long copy is a turn-off for me, but I’m intrigued to know what others think. Forget the received wisdom – I’m looking at personal responses here – does long copy direct marketing get you buying, or do you break out in hives and move on?

  • wintress
    Hi Anthony,

    Just saw your interview on SocialMediaPortal -- showed up in my Google Alerts, so I thought I'd come check out your blog. Looks like good stuff. I'll add it to my feeds. I'm always looking to see what other copywriters are up to and share tips.

    Regarding long copy -- I just can't bring myself to do it. I've tried, and the customer always ends up unsatisfied, and I always end up unhappy. The stuff really does make my stomach turn, and I always feel like a snake oil salesman when I'm trying to do it.

    Honestly, I agree that stats say it does work, but I'd like to see some stats on what sort of customer it works on. I'm probably going to get yelled at by somebody for this, but... my instinct it to say that it probably works better on target audiences with lower education and income levels. But I don't have any studies to back me up. What do you think?

    Anyway, good to meet you -- come check out our blog some time if you get the inkling: www.thewritersforhire.com/blog.
  • Hi Wintress

    Thanks for the kind compliment...

    So pleased a fellow copywriter shares my scepticism about long copy! As for the target audience, I certainly think naivety must play a part. My natural defences (along with my shackles) go right up at the sight of long copy DM - I'm already looking for the con.

    I've taken a quick look at your blog, and it looks extremely interesting, so I'll be subscribing any sec...

    Hope to talk again soon
    Anthony @ AH Copy
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